7 comments on “The Waiting Room

  1. I love “The Man”– other poems, too, but that one really home. Particularly:
    “Marsalis blows cool crystal riffs through the Bose,
    Fleet fillips of flame dance duets with aplomb”
    Just beautiful!! So glad you visited my blog– will poke around yours some more after I deeply read “The Man.”


  2. this is magnificent Paul…the rhyme scheme is fantastic…the imagery is great…I enjoyed everything about this Poem… this in my humble opinion is a masterpiece…


  3. Love it; a full fledged story in verse. You knowledge and use of the language continues to amaze me. Not to mention (an ironic phrase) your prolific output.
    Thank you,


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