23 comments on “Undertow

  1. Paul, I have despised nearly every work of blogger-poetry I’ve ever read, but this is pretty damn good. I would have liked it in a different format (why center it?), but other than that, very nice phrase-making and rhythm.

    I’ll be sure to keep reading your stuff. Well done.

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  2. I have to echol Ellen–“exhilarating”; I was squinting into the sun on water glare, hearing the perfect knife cuts of limbs, smelling the intoxicating perfume of the sea, smiling and shyly waving as you came out.

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  3. You’re still slicing through! With your writing you’re still slicing through nature, the same beautiful, natural realms of thought and feeling, though they may seem less material and more spiritual in nature.

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