19 comments on “Moth

  1. Paul, what can i say! This is magnificent! “fenestral gap-trapped ….” absolutely love it. diction, syntax, rhythms – a firework display. Hell, I know a true poet when I see one. Fabulous!

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  2. This is a great piece. I was taken back to Carlos Castaneda’s ” Don Juan, A Yaqui Way of Knowledge” a book I read as a youth. Thank you. ~ Michael

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