(For Papa – Ettore Paolo “Paul Hector” Lenzi, 1910-1998)
my old man was called dago
wop, guinea and greaseball
by those who would treat him
like dirt on their shoes
but he stood them all down
with a technique designed
to carve home from
unwelcoming streets
penetrating with gaze shot
from confident eyes
he would halt them off stride
in their insolent tracks
from his elegant height
he would smoothly disarm them
with dignified smiles
and polite introduction
then clasp mighty handshakes
while dropping his other
like open-palmed steel
on their lowering shoulders
a few would make hang-dog
retreat in a muttering
state of confusion
but most of them realized
surprised of a moment
they’d just made acquaintance
with one damned remarkable man
a man who from then on
they merely called friend
What a wonderful tribute to what must have been a most wonderful man and father!!
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he was, indeed – I miss him often
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Paul,
What a wonderful story, thank you for sharing. Ann
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my pleasure, ann
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This is a great poem, I realy like your technique, very polished, and the subject handled with great dignity. Thanks for sharing.
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I sincerely appreciate your kind comments
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Wow, this is multi-leveled “lovely”–he sounds like a fine man, to be admired and respected (and loved) indeed. God bless you–Cj
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I was blessed to be his son
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A great tribute. Immensely moving words
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seems he’s always moving in me – no matter what I write
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Paul, you still have it. One of the best writers I know. Semper Fi
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Semper Fi, John – your comment means a lot – give my best to the old gang
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Really nice remembrance. My dad died when I was only 4, but I still have wonderful recollections. It’s hard to know which are real and which manufactured from pictures, but in the mind they feel the same. This is one of the first poems I wrote when I started writing a little over a year ago. http://mypoetryandverse.wordpress.com/2013/01/17/the-gingerbread-man/ For some reason I remember the Gingerbread man on Captain Kangaroo, the morning that I found out that he had died. The mind is a curious thing!
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your comments are deeply appreciated – I enjoyed your gingerbread poem very much – here’s another glimpse of mine – it’s not poetry but a different kind of tribute to my father: http://poesypluspolemics.com/2013/02/03/columbus-day-1994/
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Great! We should all be so lucky to be able to stop insolence in its tracks!
Lovely tribute to your Papa…not just this but much of your writing conveys your love of your family.
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they are always on my mind – especially those who are gone
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A beautiful tribute from a very loving son.
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thank you kindly
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Your words are forever………..and for the Italians who came to this country in the 50s & 60s-the tripe, calamari & wine that was hidden under a coat at that time are now on the finest restaurants menus.
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thank you kindly
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The meter in this poem was like a boxing match! I loved it!! “Call me a Dago again” it proclaimed as it pummeled my face!!
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I’m glad I conveyed the confrontational sense of it all
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I love this poem, and can see your dad in my mind’s eye. What an amazing man he must have been. Men like him are one in a million.
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I was indeed a fortunate son
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greetings. thank you for liking my poem “with roses in my hand”. Hope to read more from you. thank you.
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you’re welcome – I hope you enjoy what you find here
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Your dad’s response to their insults is wonderful — so much better than throwing back more insults.
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thank you kindly – he was a wonderful man, indeed
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To live with dignity and overcome what others throw…what a nice piece
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thank you most kindly
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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wonderful. 🙂
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much appreciated
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Brilliantly American in passion for the ‘real’ bloke. Great post.
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he made me proud
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It was a great poem.
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Lovely 🙂
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thanks kindly
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