I forget if I’m real
can’t recall how to prove it
belief is not enough
how else integrity
duty owed truth is supreme
fiction must disappear
I forget if I’m real
can’t recall how to prove it
belief is not enough
how else integrity
duty owed truth is supreme
fiction must disappear
Writer Lynne Sargent
Poetry Puttering by Pax & Company
Sometimes everything has to be enscribed across the heavens so you can find the one line already written inside you. Sometimes it takes a great sky to find that small, bright, and indescribable wedge of freedom in your own heart. David Whyte
"drink from the well of your self and begin again" ~charles bukowski
no dust here
Looking ahead, without looking back (too often)
flights of fancy from New Zealand
You're never alone, if you've something to share
All you touch and all you see / is all your life will ever be
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Is this a haiku? If so, I thought a haiku was 5, 7, 5? Am I wrong? Very interesting though. 🙂
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it is haiku – I normally follow the 575 tradition, but it is not a rigid rule
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Kateberry, I don’t think haikus and short poems are synonymous.
Paul, good piece and very aptly stating that something real happens in just mentally accepting a belief. It also is a lifestyle. Something more real than abstract.
However, still calls for the eternal debate of what truth and integrity really mean to some of us.
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Ok. I just misunderstood.
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😉 I really liked it too
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thank you, Meka
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that debate is what keeps philosophers in business
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Hahahha! And satisfied musing older citizens lounging out in the countryside.
How with the eyes?
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Wonderful words
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thank you, Bee
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I love this. I really like the concept of what it means to be real, and the concept of proving it to others. It is interesting to think about why “being real” is so important to people. We all live in our own realities, really. Yet, society is very focused on throwing everyone in the same field of reality. (If that makes any sense.)
I love how this is a haiku, but doesn’t follow the typical haiku pattern. The very fact that you did this fits in with the actual poem somehow.
Thank you for sharing this!
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sincerely appreciate your thoughtful and kind comments
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And I appreciate your thought-provoking poetry! 😀
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Awesome
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thank you kindly
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Very Kafaka-esque. Love it!
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Kafka disturbed me at an early age
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He disturbs me now, and I think he wrote to evoke just that.
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A serve and a resounding return of serve with just the one player on court – brilliantly clever poem.
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and yet, I never played a tennis game in my life
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But fiction is so much more interesting . . .
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especially if it has the ring of truth
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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The poem is disturbing, frightening–but excellent. So, is it the 3-line form that makes it haiku, rather than syllable count? I want to learn more about this fave poetry form.
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I’m not one for rigid rules and haiku has more to do with conveying ideas in a tight form – this site may help
http://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm
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Thanks a million, Paul–will have a look-see.
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