love shares air as it sleeps
tender molecules float
in contented exchange
of sweet breaths between
face-to-face pillows
hearts and lungs correspond
compatible stirrings
invisibly synchronous
rise fall and rest
upon promises kept
through vicissitudes
storms and serenities
blended annealed by
commitment all the
psychical power of two
but some sleep faced outward
breathing their separate
perimeters curled in their
personal umbrae such couples
will never know time
Gem.
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cheers
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love
forms the shape
of our
direction
~
wonderfully
communicated
concept
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thank you kindly, Geo
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beautiful.
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thanks kindly, kimberly
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Lovely and touching….
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much appreciated, willow
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I don’t have a favorite word or line this time – the entire verse, entire moment, swept me away, including those who will never know time. Intimate, a bit sexy, filled with love … also truth. Poetic music once more.
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your comments are always delightful
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🙂
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Wow. Especially the first stanza. Wow. Thank you for sharing this.
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sincerely appreciate that, kathy
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Lovely honor payed to love!! Beautiful piece!!
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thanks most kindly
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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beautifully-written verse on the complexities and rituals of love.
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thank you most kindly
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Love of flesh and with one heart and mind. Romantic poem. 🙂
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happy that it worked for you
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very lovely, as always, thank you
Michelle
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appreciate that, Michelle
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I don’t know where my previous comment went (Alba)–but today this poem still makes me sad.
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me, too
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Lovely, Paul. I have not known you to write like this. Perfecr perception!!!
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so glad it worked for you, Heather
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