
“Old Boat” by Tracy Effinger Upton
the rowboat
bumps gently
in moorage
asleep in her
dreams of
summertime
voyages cross
silver ponds
along banks of
svelte streams
iron oarlocks
intoning the
stout chants
of hardwood
in swivel and
swim through
deep pools of
cool fisheries
halting above
rower’s secret
most spot for
new mornings
of lazy delight
where the low
rising sun skims
and glances off
sparkling surfaces
all of a unit
the wood and
the rower
the water and
all of their
summertimes
sprung from
the dreamstuff
of one grieving
widow boat
left to her
paint crumbled
reverie missing
her untethered
days pulled with
pride and an
effortless glide
through the life
of the two arms
and hands that so
lovingly built her
what fisherman doesn’t love a good boat? peeling pain or not, she has a soul, and souls are not easily dismissed . . .
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while I’m not a fisherman, I think I understand them
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Lovely poem and I like the painting too!
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thanks kindly
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I’m a water person because I grew up on a boat and spent my summers on an island so I really relate and love this poem!
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I’m glad it worked for you – I was a city boy who came to enjoy the rural life late in my years
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So soothing!
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I appreciate that very much
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Great piece, man. There’s calmness in this room now.
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so glad that it worked for you
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Profound metaphor allowing the mind to drift and quietly ponder things.
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drifting and pondering I can do
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Beautiful post Paul! I am passing on a nomination for “inspiring blog” just so you know how much I enjoy reading your lovely poetry and beautiful blog, feel free to decline if it is too time consuming for you. Details can be found at my blog http//shakeyourtailfeathers@wordpress.com.
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thank you for your most kind consideration
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my pleasure!
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…this brought tears to my eyes…you have such a sensitive and understanding heart, Paul…this is just beautiful…reminded me of my Dad, who fished when he had the opportunity to relax, after caring for his wife and eleven children…Your verse is so, so beautiful!
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and your comments touch my heart
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Reblogged this on johannisthinking and commented:
this is so beautiful…from beginning to end…all that goes into the gift of life…and how we must leave it one day…hopefully, a hint of our love remains…
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Beautiful writing! I like it
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thank you kindly
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This IS beautiful, just as Jane (from Johannisthinking) said. Gorgeous painting, too. Just beautiful imagery all around 🙂
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much appreciated
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how lovely
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thanks kindly
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Well rowed! G;)
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thanks kindly
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Beautiful picture in my mind now. Thanks.
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much appreciated
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That is so lovley, you have the masters touch with words, I always look forward to your next post! Thank you.
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your kind words are sincerely appreciated
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I love anything with the word “moorage” in it 🙂
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ha ha – I wonder why
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Sad and blissful all at once.
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thanks kindly, Anne-Marie
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Beautiful! Full and brimming with feeling & images…much like a painting!
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thanks kindly
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Reblogged this on Vagrant Poetry.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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I love this creation!
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much appreciated
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Reblogged this on A Grateful Man and commented:
I loved experiencing this creation, and wanted to share it with others who may not yet have seen it.
With Love,
Russ
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers – and for your thoughtful comment
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