the idea of the ideal
defeats distance
confers a proximity
horizon encircles
our everything
everywhere close
within reach
touchable worlds
the each of us make
green as summer
alive with affection
that breathes forth
like breezes refreshing
warm wide open spaces
unbounded metonymy
limning the landscape
that decorates
depths of the heart
flesh blood and eidola
gather and flourish
exchanging their
discontinuities
journeying out of
their solitaires
mocking the putative
powers of mere
separation with
vigorous bear hugs
we personal pioneers
chance rediscovery
seeking and finding
the old stirring scenes
the exciting old passages
brought fresh and new
into light of this
uncommon season
it doesn’t get better
than fathers and mothers
and daughters and sons
on their mountain
so strong and so thoughtful
it lifts all their memories
into the present
reunified families
four generations
of birth life and death
tolled in trials and triumphs
rewashed in the bath
of a blue sweeping sky
given fragrant caress
by a radiant tendermost
ancestral sun
once again
again once
when the once
is enough
for forever
That was so good I had to try hard to find a weakness – there isn’t one. Bravo.
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the trip nearly depleted me – but got to spend time with my son and family, and some of my late brother’s family
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The images you’ve
created in
my mind cause
me to wonder
if
great minds
think
a like.
I am very happy to have found this site
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and I’m very happy to receive your creative comment
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Powerful, sweet, moving–brought tears to my eyes….
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thanks dearly, willow
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So it was a great getaway time, right? 😀 I’m glad you were so refreshed, Paul! It’s been one superb summer up my way too…
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it was difficult but rewarding
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I was half expecting a poem in Italian 😉 well done…I love the rythm.
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glad you enjoyed it
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powerful ending (: really enjoyed this piece
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appreciate that
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beautiful tribute to a great family reunion . . . Am so happy for you!
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the 800 mile car trip was quite an ordeal for me, but it was worth it – even to see only a portion of the family
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Oh Dear Paul, This is stunning!!!!! The strength and beauty. Beautiful, my Friend 🙂
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thank you from the bottom of my heart
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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most welcome always
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The ancesto
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Sorry, I lost control of my laptop! UGH. The ancestors are smiling!
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ha ha – the gremlins are at it again
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Glad you enjoyed your trip but a long car trip must have been a little tough… this is another great one!
“…once again
again once
when the once
is enough
for forever.”
The words make me swoon!
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800 miles round trip was indeed an ordeal – I’m afraid that will be the last one
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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This is really great. I love the way you uses the expressions on every line. Excellent.
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thanks kindly, Sherrie
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Funny how I share this feeling at 54 but found family so restricting as a young man.
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we knew so much in our youth
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Excellence in lowercase.
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thank you most kindly
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