
“Weaver on the Loom” by Vincent Van Gogh
fingers of poets
play nimbly through
tangles of language
pluck warp and weft
neatly metered to clacks
of the beater board
yielding a tapestry
slowly sequentially
tiny but truthful
colors enriched by deep
pigments of mind
Wonderful comparison! Loved it Paul!
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much appreciated, penny
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Once more the master of metaphor is at work. Splendid.
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cheers
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Loominous . . .
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hahahaha
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Ah!Beauty of it!
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thanks kindly, margaret
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Your work is always a delight to read!
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Oh I love this one mega-mucho!
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gracias senorita
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Love it! You are a poetic genius!
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sincerely appreciate that
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Gosh this was wonderful, Paul! Thank you!
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I appreciate that, Debbie
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Nothing wasted, caught in with the warp and weft like 3D Scrabble. Depthful description lovely and harp like delicately picked and plaited..lovely, thank you
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thank you for your kind words, cheryl
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Sharing the gift of writing, I thank YOU for allowing me too!
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I love Vincent, Paul, but have not seen this one before. Days of my youth when I painted more, myself. Love your poem. Something I had not thought of, myself. Poems on paintings! Nice thought. Do you write lots of poems? I seem to write more at the moment because I just write what comes to me, though often they are coloured by the seasons, or ideas of that ilk. I am not goibg to purloin your idea for public, but, it is a thought though.
I hope you have had a gander at my latest offerings? If so, please comnent. They are not my only recent odes, but just a few.
Of course, finding new subjects can be hard. I often wonder, am i talking to myself ? Does anyone read my musings? These capabilities if being abke to ‘follow’ people, gives pause for hope that you are being heard/read out there in the big old Universe.
So I do thank you for following me, the more the merrier.
I live in England so we are bridging the good old Atlantic here.
Evelyn
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appreciate your thoughtful comments, Evelyn – I started writing poetry when I retired 10 years ago
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Just mention that a couple of my favourite Vuncent’s are “Crows Ovr a Cornfield” and “The Potato Eaters”. There are others I like too but the old memory for titles is a bit on the slo side.
Evelyn
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I completely understand slow
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Magical words – well woven together – thank you G:)
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much appreciated, graeme
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Love this one
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thanks kindly, keith
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LOVE extended metaphors! This one really works!
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glad you enjoyed it, jane
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very creative, especially love “colors enriched by deep
pigments of mind” love and light to you my friend, Michelle
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thank you kindly, Michelle
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Reblogged this on THIS, THAT AND OTHER SUCH POSTINGS by ANN JOHNSON-MURPHREE and commented:
Another great poem from Paul F. Lenzi
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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It is always my pleasure Paul. Ann
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A masters fingers at work sir! Another great one from your mind of wonderful stories!
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appreciate the thoughtful comment
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play of words…kudos !
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thanks kindly
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Reblogged this on themonkseal.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Lovely metaphor, Paul 🙂
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glad you thought so, celestine
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Reblogged this on Vagrant Poetry.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Reblogged this on Nehal's World and commented:
His poems are the masterclass in poetry! I love to read always, I learn a lot!
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers – and for your very kind words
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My pleasure!
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