the mind is a lonely chamber
a notional womb-space
unquietly busy with purposeless
comings and goings of strangers
thoughts alien dispossessed
orphans of intellect
stumbling about unenlightened
bereft of connections
yet hopeful of being adopted
they jostle they manhandle
shove through the crowd
ever seeking positions of
frontal lobe prominence
wanting the slightest
acknowledgement knowing
that even a brief recognition
assures them distinction of place
in grand memory banks
here they’d live in indefinite
pregnancy waiting that moment
of formative candid nativity
fully emergent intact and discrete
as one cogent idea held aloft
on its very own brainwave
now ready and willing and able
to travel its way to expression
in audible speech by its host
no doubt about it: an idea is a dangerous thing . . .
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especially among politicians
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Oh Wow, Oh WOW–I love it. Good.
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so glad that you did – double wows make my day for sure
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“Unquietly busy” definitely sums up my mind.
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so, who needs sleep, anyway?
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Sure, I can do Delirious!
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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most welcome
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“notational womb space” is divine.
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thanks dearly
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Paul, I adore you.
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right back at you, shrinks
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A clever analysis superbly constructed in the words of one great poem. A bravo moment methinks.
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thank you, sir
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Wow. that’s a great poem. Very inspirational, and very well crafted.
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I sincerely appreciate that
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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This had me nearly in tears–but maybe it’s just my mood today. Grand writing.
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true poets are easily brought to tears
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Some days.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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