16 comments on “Reticence

  1. Oh my GOSH, this just soars, Paul. I love it all, but am partial, particularly touched by, “fear of falling ignored through fat cracks of ambivalence”. You have named the place where I fell, but I think I’m crawling out in these silver years.

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  2. Beautiful and sincere. But do you really believe this: “acceptance from joining the throng”? Being a poet, I would think standing apart from the throng is your more likely place.

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