floating outside and above oneself
watching each movement and motive
a doppelgang presence untethered
objective yet intimate inside-out
shadows of mind melt in sunlight
revealing the shape of each internal
conflict each unconscious choice
love or hate fight or flight to belong
or be gone to believe or deny to
embrace or rebuff trust or doubt
easy questions with difficult answers
here the hovering self draws a bead
from these rarefied clarified heights
maps the mindless mechanics the
arcane emotional math of ambivalent
passions this out-of-self self takes
its airborne perspective informing
identity free from terrestrial taints
not a trace of pedestrian odors
survive in these clean breezy precincts
aeolian free yet invested in how
the man walking below makes his way
through the muck and the mire of life
this affinitve being this airy reflection
man’s own metaphysical touchstone
his de facto ethereal archetype angel
I loved that, Paul. The reflection idea works a treat.
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thanks kindly, Richard
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Welcome 🙂
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To think of all the hash pipes users smoked back in the day just to achieve a state of reflective out of body experience that was there all the time, unnoticed by those trying too hard or merely devoid of a living soul. As ever you offer up another gem.
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I should probably cease plucking mushrooms from my backyard forest
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so light and airy; so fraught with unknown consequences
This one grabs me and won’t let go!
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thanks kindly, Elouise
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Ah yes, the gift of detachment from our demons, be they of body or of mind . . . It is a grace . . .
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thanks for the gentle interpretation
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It is a soliloquy with distinctive voices; elegantly sketched.
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thank you most kindly
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I have lucid dreams like this. And love them. Described to a T, Paul.
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perhaps it’s a hardwired feature of the human brain
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You outdid yourself, Paul, with this gem!
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thanks kindly, ellen
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This is wonderful Paul… Loved reading it… floating above it… lingering above myself watching the words pass before my eyes in my humanness… Thanks for sharing it with us… see you in the ether…
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so glad you enjoyed it, Michael
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