24 comments on “Carrying the Torch

  1. The content cannot be faulted. Once more a depthful poem communicating it’s ideas well.
    I enjoy reading your poems that rhyme, but if I may pass on a piece of advice I received: rhyming lines should share the same number of syllables, especially couplets. My mother-in-law-to-be told me that as I was editing my poetry collection and it really did help a lot. Hope that helps in future works. Keep up the wonderful writings 🙂

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