rich lavender skies cast botanical hues
beneath knees of mute bluffs
splashed by deep orange sunsets
watered by the Snake run with tears
shed by warrior ghosts
Shoshone and Paiute and Ute
keeping vigil on rituals
practiced for ten thousand years
here in the hauntings
color dances with texture
across ballroom landscapes
where moccasins made gentle injury
where buffalo skins swaddled tentpoles
and spirits spoke portents in pipesmoke
but to see them today takes a shamanic gaze
into killing field shadows and riverbank mists
tracing grounds of a once sacred world
whose future will never match history
Beautiful imagery with your words. The poem transported me there, and I was one with the Indians, broken and forlorn over the decimation of the land.
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Your comment more than validates my effort – thanks, Paul.
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your words echoed the beat of drums…
Beautiful art to entwine with your words…
Take Care…
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ladyblue
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thank you so much, ladyblue
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what a magic carpet! thank you!
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glad you enjoyed the ride
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I’m ready for the next ride!
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Excellent poem! You let me appreciate a part of our history that I too often ignore. Thank you for bringing this to life for me.
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my pleasure
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love it!
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I’m pleased you do
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Loved this, Paul. Synchronicity. Just reblogged a post on Shamanism. The loss of the Native Americans is a cause close to my heart. So glad you wrote about it.
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thank you Ellen – we must have been channeling kindred spirirts
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Amazing words as usual. I could imagine every step of the way through your poem. Brilliant
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what lovely comments – thank you so much
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Gorgeous color and imagery–the beauty of violent tragedy. A shame.
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your comment knocks my socks off – “beauty of a violent tragedy” is so powerful
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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This is a tremendous description. I am from the high desert and I spent my childhood tracing the paths of the Ute and the Anasazi. Beautifully on the mark.
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that means a lot to me – it struck me as a most remarkable place when I visited years ago
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you, sir
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Imagery, imagery and thrice imagery – ’tis a great skill I’d like to steal! Brilliant.
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remarkable geography in that part of the country
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This is beautiful and moving–such grandeur of writing, what a gift.
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I deeply appreciate that
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Paul, this is one of the beautiful poems I have ever read. It is truly amazing and should hanging in a gallery next to some Native American art. Peace.
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your kind and thoughtful comments are deeply appreciated
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“whose future will never match history” – Sadly so.
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indeed
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Hi Paul. Where have they gone everyone? Thank you for liking my poem Savage Streets! Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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thanks, malc
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Deeply touched by the words, the imagery, the truth…thank you!
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as I am touched by, and grateful for, your comment
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I have taken a long swim in your poetry tonight and feel as though I am a fish. I am most satisfied in this sea of thoughtful letters. Thank you.
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I’m glad you found the waters satisfactory
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