13 comments on “Riverman

  1. By far and away the finest piece of writing I have read this day…week…year…can’t say. In terms of raising the bar you have succeeded once more…even I can see the importance of that final verse…’unleavened destinies’…brilliant!

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  2. A beautiful piece. I was most struck by the definition of gravity as ‘dead gravity’, i have not tried imagining it and processing it that way yet, so since the first verse I am already wandering many thoughts, and the remaining verses are as equally rich in meaning for me.

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