
“Progress and Psychosis” by J Ethan Hopper
let’s dance
on the shoddy parquet
that maddening marquetry
inlaid by angry fingers
resurfacing
prefrontal cortex
for violent release
of uncontrolled impulse
devolving the limbic
paleomammalian
instinctive self
let’s dance
to the devil’s own beat
that maddening metronome
urged on by angry fingers
disarranging
chords of compunction
for vicious release
of unrestrained mayhem
subverting the conscience
morality pissed upon
flushed to the sewers
I don’t care
why we dance
broken brains or sheer badness
who gives a rat’s ass
just so long as they
lock us both up
and then melt down the keys
into molten revenge
or burnt reckoning
either way putting us
where we belong
Arrrrggghhhh, sounds like my day!
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ooh – sorry to hear that – hope tomorrow is better
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Wow, that is simply amazing…one of my favourites of yours…so striking, so powerful…just wow…. 🙂
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deeply appreciated
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“molten revenge” damn
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glad you liked it
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Very powerful-you pack your signature punch!
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hah – usually my signature is illegible
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There is psychedelic art. I think we should have psychotic art, because this expression bears a title.
Nice attempt, Paul.
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I keep trying
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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great Job
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thanks kindly
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So very good; so very profound – could double as a fine song as well as a poem methinks.
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it would need a heavy metal touch, I think
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It’s as though you could step into the heads of those who suffer the malady. Makes me think of my neighbor Tim again, how relieved he must have been to die and gain peace from all the voices. Though I miss him, I’m so glad for him.
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living in my head as I do, I try to imagine how others do so
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I wonder just how many of us “live in our heads”, Paul–I used to think I was the odd woman out.
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I think we have lots of company
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Besides the company in our heads.
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Paul, you never cease to amaze me, sir. If the Pope ever seeks votes for a patron saint of poetry, you’d get mine.
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patron sinner may be more appropriate
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*grins* You inspire us to sin well, sir!
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Reblogged this on Baldypoems and commented:
Wow. Just wow.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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