grabbing mendicants by their humility
you fling them insouciant like ragdolls aside
smacking down the least threatening talent
that so much as lifts up a competent hand
your swaggering insensate skin undeterred
clears a fat assed man’s path for your greatness
to wrangle the rainbows and sunbeams
in sheaves of light holstered alongside
your chariot glowing like warrior’s fasces
enarmed with your monogramed blades
swelled pride for your bootstraps and ladder rung toes
leaves no space in your heartscape for mercy or care
loveless journeys enable your conquering ways
and your raising up castles of unpeopled gloom
in each land where you crowned yourself king
but unable to see either people who hate
or dismiss you as tinhorn nonentity
you never quite realize that no other people exist
or that you will leave only one mark on the world
the unadorned print of your much pissed on grave
I recall that Ray Bradbury wrote a short story about a wealthy Irish man whom the town dispised. His will required that his store of wiskey be burried with him. The towns folk consumed it at his wake, then went to his grave and pissed it all back on him. Similiar sentiment to your poem.
Oscar
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thanks for reading and commenting, Oscar – it’s exciting to think I might have been channeling Bradbury – I read him long ago but perhaps something remained in my mind
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I heard an interview with a film maker (did not catch his name, his movies included “The Avengers”) who has come out with a version of Shakespeare’s “Much Ado About Nothing”). He talked about how this play set the precident for so many movies since the 1930’s with the reluctant lovers whom everyone else is trying to push to fall in love. Sometimes, those cultural references are imbeded in our minds, and come out in our own expressions.
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Wow, powerful disgust for relentless arrogance–so many great phrases.
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So many great phrases indeed! Love: clears a fat assed man’s path for your greatness
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thanks, Melanie – had some fun with these lines
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disgust indeed, Jael
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whew! just starting to get caught up on my reading (low energy since kidney stones) – I’m sure glad I didn’t miss this one!
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I’m glad, too – I’m sure we can all put at least one face to this rant
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aye! at least one!
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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‘Wrangle the rainbows’ top marks for that one 🙂
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thanks, richard
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Dear sir,
I very much liked the poem, though I couldn’t understand everything. The title struck me as it is the name of one of my favourite bands (also the name for a Belgian bear I believe). You have a way with words and it sometimes reminds me of Tom Waits, do you know him by any chance? Keep up the good work.
Kind regards,
Arthur
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very flattered to remind you of Waits – I know him and admire his gritty belly-born songs
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as good this time around as last!
thank you for reposting this!
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top of the morning to you
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Mornin’, sir! Howz thangz in the frozen north? Have I mentioned lately that I’m ready for Spring?
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mud season
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Every line a perfection; no wasted words – don’t know how you do it but it’s good you do!
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appreciate your ever generous comments
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wonderful use of language, Paul. mendicant is a word I love but so rarely seen used these days, it is more poetic than ‘beggar’ but still has a humble feel to it. great poem, sir. best wishes from baldy
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we poets love words, don’t we
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It’s been a while since I’ve read your blog. Looks like I have missed a lot! NaPoWriMo has brought me back on the yellow brick poetry road.
What a marvellous line: “the unadorned print of your much pissed on grave”.
Happy to be back 🙂
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welcome back – glad you enjoyed this older poem
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I like to click around and see what I encounter. Just like browsing in a library.
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