
“Barber Shop” by Robert Cottingham
(Remembering Grandpa Niccolò DeTore)
bay rum barber poet
stropped razors and verse
white handlebar mustache
handsomely lifted his smile
Neapolitan gold in his eyes
bootstrap pride in his step
classic rhetoric served at
each meal from his dapper
silk tie and trim waistcoat
surveying his long kitchen
table where thirteen young
minds learned their everlast
lessons of life in America
steeped in his practicum
lovingly eagerly wrapped
in his keen gentle wisdom
This is a lovely tribute.
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thank you, my friend
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Stunningly visual! Your words transported me, and I am indeed moved by them. Thank you.
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I greatly appreciate that, jay
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Gorgeous! I love “everlast”
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so glad you enjoyed it
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This was a great tribute. I especially liked the line “bootstrap pride in his step”. We could use a bit more of that these days, if it means what I think it does…
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it does – and we do, indeed
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I’ll run with ‘tribute’ and ‘stunningly visual’ as two other bloggers have commented already.
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he passed when I was a boy and I often wish I had more time with him
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Love it, a great way to honour a generation.
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thank you kindly, Ina
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Oh I love this–“Neapolitan gold” in every line. Everyone should be gifted with such a granpa.
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he was an impressive man
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thanks for sharing my poem with your readers
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Wonderful, as always!
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thanks kindly, ellen
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this has charm
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thanks kindly
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Beautiful patriarchal portrayal. There is something so rich in recollecting characters from our past. Really belonging to a dynasty. Reminded me of my father’s father. A lost world of gentlemen and old world values. A wonderful read.x
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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memorable . . .
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Beautiful tribute Paul!
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thank you most kindly
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You’re welcome Paul!
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