
“Abstract Manhattan” by Brian Carter
metropolis sculpted
from granite ambitions
each skyscraping statue
erect in its embrace by
an armature of commerce
deep mercantile canyons
their enterprise shimmers
in swift racing glide on
the grain of two rivers
converged at the battery
southernmost outpost
of free aspirations
here history found him
and gave his sharp mind
clever means to discover
and climb secret paths
from the sun deprived
pall of collective endeavor
attaining a rarefied place
among peaks of the skyline
enlightened and warmed
by his own private sun
Should be read aloud to a Gershwin accompaniment!
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thank you, sir – the residue of dreams and a touch of indigestion
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so very fine! his private sun…wonderful
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much appreciated, holly
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a pleasure!
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love the ‘sculpted from granite ambitions’
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thanks kindly, maureen
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Well drawn word picture of Manhattan. I like “skyscraping statues” and “deep mercantile canyons”.
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thanks ever so much
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