
“Prison Corridor” by Lara Mukahirn
unrecognizable soul
just a wisp of a man
a mere rumor of shoulders
in drape of torn rags
cruelly hobbled by
muscle and bone become
weakened and wasted
skin soiled and soured
the telltale of lightless
unwashed fetid years of
forbidding imprisonment
bent but not broken
here standing in chains
of his pain the old poet
his verses summarily
deemed as subversive
here standing in chains
of his pains the old poet
defiant as ever impenitent
vivid unquenchable flames
dance their ethical dance
in his resolute eyes
“but the Chinese and the Iranians lock them up and throw away the keys . . .”
– Peter Notehelfer
Time warp into a classical era leaving the reader wondering what went before. Brilliant piece of story writing in poetic form…detect a few of those great metaphors of yours also.
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glad you enjoyed it, mike
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Most saddest poem written today … Terrible fate for some …
(°ヘ°)
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but his spirit is unconquerable
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I can relate to this having been locked up over twenty times in psychiatric wards, and three nights in three separate jails to boot.
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holy cow!
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Powerfully beautiful.
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deeply appreciate that
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Powerful write, as expected…I particularly like “mere rumor of shoulders”.
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glad to know you enjoyed it
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The body can be a cruel jailer to a sharp mind unless accompanied by an indomitable spirit. There is freedom within. You’re living proof of that in your words, Paul.
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thanks dearly, anne-marie – there are days when survival is thoroughly exhausting
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I’m so sorry to hear that, Paul. x
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A moving tribute to the many poets who not only go unpublished but whose voices are forever lost in the long corridors of political or psychological oppression . . . And THANK YOU for acknowledging the prompt . . .
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a reminder of our own blessed freedom
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What a moving story presented in such a brilliant poetic form! Liked it very much.
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I appreciate that most sincerely
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