30 comments on “Awkward

  1. ha! my dear ‘ol dad usta tell me “if you don’t want any on you, don’t stir it with a stick.”


  2. Well written Paul, I like this piece and the image is excellent. Thanks for liking my post – Summer’s Birthday.


  3. Great poem. I always wondered–re the final 2 lines–which is correct, “your” or “you”. Now I know, thanks.


  4. I had a little fun there putting thought bubbles above the bored guy’s head. I’m pretty sure I’ve been on both ends of that conversation. ‘Did ye, aye? Good for you. Really? Beam me up, Scottie. Feck sake, wheest, will ye.’ I could go on. And have been known to. 🙂

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