
“War Hero” by Laura Barbosa
we are that species
who numbers cadavers
more wardead than
died-in-their-sleep
since antiquity more
bloody years rent with
combat or suffering
siege than at peace
knowing war begets
war we make beautiful
bullets from bones
to recycle their valor
reconstitute sacrifice
crumbled in graves
of both soldiers and
citizens lost in the
billows of battle-fog
all of which pale against
whole populations
entire generations
erased by the wickedly
punishing sword
flame or slavemaker’s
brandiron victory often
takes into its hands
asserting its dubious
rights of immoral
barbaric revenge
oh the genocides
staining each century
back through prehistory
utter depravity
strangling humanity
with our pretensions
to power that mock
the theology vested
in principled ethics of
jus bellum iustum
we know the right
thing yet continue
continue continue
to do what we know
to be wrong leaving
open for all our black
bloodied millennia
questions of whether
or not our apparent
intractable flaws
are perfectible
A word used too much these days yet meant in its true sense – ‘Epic’ – wonderful piece.
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your generous comment is greatly appreciated
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Awesome!!!
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thank you most kindly
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Recycled valor and reconstituted sacrifice–what a terrible commentary, both tragically sad and reprehensible.
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it seems to be our never ending history
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Powerful stuff. You’ve really captured and distilled the essence of human iniquity in this beautiful piece. This is the same burden of history that I feel, that shapes my own writing.
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I deeply appreciate your generous and thoughtful comments
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People (young men mostly) get dragged into war or jingoistically persuaded by their incompetent elders. You wrote a great, flowing regretful piece here.
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much appreciated, Robert
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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“we know the right / thing yet continue / continue continue / to do what we know / to be wrong” – Finger on the pulse of our pathology, St Paul . . . [Romans 7 . . .]
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we all struggle with our sinful nature
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So true. All of it and so well said!
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thanks kindly
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Depressing, but beautifully written–I don’t think we’ll escape repetition of war till Jesus returns.
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it’s our most miserable imperfection
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Yes Sir, right up there with turning on our most intimate family.
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So very true. Wonderful poem.
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thank you most kindly
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You are always so insightful Paul. Thanks for another wonderfully crafted poem.
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I appreciate that more than I can say
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