
“La Pieta” by Michelangelo
I kneel before those who
elicit the secrets of stone
who with uncanny placement
and grasp touch the mallet
to chisel on ancient cold blocks
of raw travertine limestone
or coarsely veined marble
whose handsome impurities
came to their grain when
convulsions within white-hot
wombs bore the offspring
of fire and mountain
I kneel before those who
ordain with their powerful
fingers perfection of man
tactile genius that coaxes
from hard angularities
timeless soft contours of flesh
in its model of moments
alive with expressions of all
the emotion a heart can
experience giving the gift
of immortal endurance to
human impermanent life
I kneel before those who
make flawless the flawed
forms of body and conscience
we carry through time
it’s the sculptor whose skills
can transform the prosaic
with sumptuous subtleties
elevate banal existence
creating from homely dead stone
possibilities at their epitome
more than painter or poet
the sculptor sits closest to God
So lovely, flowing and yes almost tactile, I love the way, “elevate banal existence” stands out..and so elevated it is, the contrasts of ferocity in creation to cold stone and then life given again – no longer banal but to be wondered at – the long view, much needed. Thank you.
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your erudite insights are sincerely appreciated
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Hee hee ! Well one can pretend 😉 I did so enjoy this, some of us are just grubbing hacks and to read a master craftsman is like enjoying a good red wine!
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you are no hack and I am no master, but I thank you most sincerely
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Took me away to the entrance to the cathedral at Amiens for a moment…the very thing a good poem should do as this one is a descriptive gem of a poem.
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that means a great deal to me – thank you, sir
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and I kneel before your word mastery…and whatever saint you channel AWEsome…Holy, even
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your kind and generous comment is deeply appreciated – to be tucked into my keepsake box
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Powerful oath to Michelangelo AND poetry.
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much appreciated, joanna
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Truly amazing.
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thank you, dearly
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Your poem could be one of those sculptures, Paul.
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you’re very kind, ken
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What else could anyone need when all has been expertly done? The sculpture’s diligence and artistry has been honoured well and what the writer purports to convey smoothly layed bare for all to see. This is Lenzi @ work
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your thoughtfulness is sincerely appreciated
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ditto
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thanks kindly
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Wonderful, Paul 🙂
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thanks dearly, celestine
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Magnificent tribute to the art of sculpture and poesy.
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sincerely appreciate that
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Some talent from God the potter. I have none of that talent but admire it immensely.
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I’ve seen many statues that take the breath away
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