
“Dark Magic Sky Reflected in the Lake” by Rock Bull
watching the lake watch the sky
still in youth of a trimester summer
these dim ancient eyes trying hard
to interpret the rippling of clouds
scudding gold in formations of flight
from an angry explosion of sunset
confessing their sins to these waters
unaware of my witness and eavesdrop
that causes my turn of attention to
all that I’ve done in my long day of life
I stand into the lake till it covers me
cleanses me washed with both water
and sky before time sends descent of its
deaf dumb and blind seal of darkness
That’s a great opening line, but it has to be to stand with the rest of them.
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much appreciated
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That photo !!!!!!!!
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yeah!
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absolutely wonderful, Paul
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much appreciated, syl
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Always, my friend
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FANTASTIC ! 🙂 (yes I meant to shout it 🙂 )
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I can hear it – thanks kindly
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Could well be the words of legendary Merlin…save that they are not, plainly not. Super stuff Paul.
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thank you, mike
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Awesome picture, the lake mirroring the gold-lined clouds! Beautifully portrayed in the poem!
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much appreciated
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This is lovely.
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thanks kindly
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Pure beauty in your words. I feel the holiness of the lake water’s cleansing.
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that was the sense I had when writing it
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Yes! Yes! Yes! I am there.
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welcome to my world
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Beautiful!
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You got me with that one, shh, may even be a tear in there. Really like it sir.
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pleased to know you enjoyed it
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