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(Originally posted February 2014 during the Sochi winter games)
silken circles
express an ideal
flying high over youth
interwoven with notion
that impulse for war
can be tamed
may be turned
through a civilized pledge
intercultural pact
to compete upon
deathless clean fields
bloodless honor to those
who best manifest
citius altius fortius
bodies unbroken
retaining pure powers
of prime and of pride
past the truce that
ensues their campaign
so what happens
to ideals of youth
when those bodies
attain middle age
when the five rings
are struck and the
battle-flag raised
when the discus and
ski-pole are traded
for bullets and bombs
which of youth or
maturity makes for
an age that is mere
aberration and which
is the nature that
truly defines us
So many alternatives to our current state of the world. How did we get stuck with this one? —Chagall
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Yes, how did we get stuck indeed? Powerful;poem, Paul.
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thank you kindly, celestine
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it seems we got here by choice, chagall
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Albeit, the choice of a handful though, no? —CC
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I guess so – but in most cases, the handful either gain or maintain their power with our consent or at least acquiescence
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A one party system of Somnambulists. —CC
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I had Joni Mitchell trading the fiddle for the drum in my head when reading this magnificent poem. Hers a song; yours poem both same effect.
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ahh, Joni Mitchell – from back in the days when we thought we could change the world
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We just can’t change human nature, can we?
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no matter how hard we try, it seems
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Most Welcome ALWAYS!
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nice and apt poem – thought provoking – its all very well to play war as a game, getting agrresion out of the system – animals too play and wrestle in mock combat – not so much for fun as to prepare for the reality later – are our games then an outlet or a preparation – let us look at our natures – what interests us so much in watching a predator hunt and kill – are we then predator or prey?
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fascinating questions
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The economy generated by games pales in comparison to that generated by wars . . . And besides: wars are more sustainable . . .
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woke up on the cynical side, did we?
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Good questions all!
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thanks kindly
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I knew something was wrong when I hadn’t read you in a few days. Reader hasn’t been presenting me with your work. I got fed up a decided to look. Glad I did. This articulates a lot of what has been on my mind about the world lately.
All the hard won change of decades ago and many went to sleep while we slid in some ways, content with the “progress” more superficial in nature. Good one, Paul.
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I’m having “reader” problems, too – civilization does indeed seem in retrograde
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Hi Paul. Bringing nations together to do battle without conflict or violence. Thank you for liking my poem “Rational Thought!” Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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thank you, malc
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