
“Self-Loathing” by Ponsonby Britt
man at his center
so vulnerable
not one belly bone
guards his mortality
soft tissue perils abound
all the organs of
ethical impulses
faced with a danger
that even the
inchoate fetus
can well comprehend
countless predators
wanting to feast
upon private interiors
stealing the essence
of principled men
to add into their own
so much easier is it
to eat of good flesh
than to do the slow work
of creating it
day after night
after unswerving day
how ironic the faith
of despicable minds
in romantic conceits
that morality has a
corporeal substance
how tragic the faith
of despicable minds
that a killing of virtue
can somehow redeem
self-contempt
I have to say that I love this one. 🙂
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and I have to say that I loved this comment – many thanks, brenda
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You’re most welcome. 🙂
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Well now, I must confess that this is a poem I’ll need to print out and read over two`dozen times before I know how to pen an appropriate response. Take that as a compliment since I rarely find a poem that begs so much thought . . .
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who else but the good Padre Pedro would find such a polite way to say WTF?!
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I absolutely loved reading this. It is very thought provoking, thank you for sharing. 🙂
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much appreciated, kaushik
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I would greatly appreciate it if you could have a look at my page as well for, I would love to hear your views. Cheers! 🙂
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It sounds like a cheap shot to merely say this is one of your ‘best’ ever poems, yet you know already I credit your portfolio of poetry as a thing up there with the immaculate poets of days of yore. Put simply, this one is sublime! By the way, just finished volume 1 of your magnificent anthology…about to order volume 2. Blindingly great poem of perfect metaphor Paul.
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mike, my friend, your comments fairly lifted me from this blasted chair and have me soaring with our beloved north country eagles – thank you most sincerely
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The picture goes perfectly with this you talented man, Paul.
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thanks sincerely, candice
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Always – my friend Paul xo
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Pretty amazing dance of the picture and shape of your poem. Belly Bone is an image in itself. I love this!
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…and I love your comment – many thanks
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