
“Abstract Head: Pain” by Alexei Jawlensky
(Originally posted February 2014)
finding curves in the wounds
was surprising
the pain always angular
all hard and sharp
acute corners
pushed up under muscle
where only the dirty moons
rising from sickly brown bottles
and bedsheets
give comfort of two or three
midnight click hours
of crippling clocks
as the curves of the wounds
swallow life bit by bit
mean and raw with their red
violent purpose
Love the poem, but I already take tooooo many pills.
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I understand completely
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Your fantastic choice of subject matter never ceases to amaze. A very fine poem indeed.
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it comes from experience
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Reblogged this on Hey Sweetheart, Get Me Rewrite!.
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thanks for the reblog, terry
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You write so that we feel the wounds with you–excellent.
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it’s been my constant inspiration
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I get this! I worked in Home Health Care as a Nursing Assistant for years. Well written
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thank you most kindly
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Wow. Very visceral…
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much appreciated, melody
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Like Hemingway (I believe) said, Write what you know and I know you know plenty about this and that is unfortunate but it makes wonderful poetry!
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thank you so much, Ellen
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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I too, am on meds and your poem captures that journey very well!
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a necessary evil
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Powerful insight Paul. Thank you for sharing.
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we poets must all use our experiences
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I agree Paul. There’s a part of me in most of my poems.
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Tick by tick…so very true
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appreciate that
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Finger on the pulse . . .
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I love this…I love how you draw us in…It awesome
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thank you most kindly, Rose
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I can feel the pain slowly disappear and return in the poem.
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your validating comment is greatly appreciated, Richard
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Incredible! Your poem makes the experience of pain almost bearable.
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I have a great deal of experience
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I’m sorry you have to feel so much pain.
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it’s part of every life
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