
Model of French Warship “Le Soleil Royale”
the worm in the wood
subtle seaborne invader
soft mouth who makes meal
of hard lapstrake in deadrise
of commonwealth destinies
hinders the smooth sail
of maritime conquest
pernicious bold parasite
given to stubborn defiance
unfazed by the theater of
thrones under ukase of kings
here is ample example of
seemingly powerless creatures
the homely and humble
whose instinct is honed
to create with destruction
the only skill left to its
primitive purpose
a thwarting impediment
though it be small
to the brazen advances
of unreserved arrogance
speaking resistance
to undeserved power
Provokes thoughts, questions and admiration as to such well chosen words…the master at work once more. A bravo moment due.
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your generous comments are kindly appreciated
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The first line is in itself a poem within the poem, a theological portrait of what Calvin called ‘total depravity’ and of what the church as taught us of ‘original sin’ – the serpent at the heart of Eden – a negative image which you have turned to positive ends in this poem . . . You make me think too much!
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I’m tickled to think that a man of my age and condition could be guilty of anything even approaching total depravity
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Wondrous prose, exceptional relation to the plight of the individual.
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I’m glad to know it worked for you
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Very subtle art!
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much appreciated
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Wonderful poem
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much appreciated
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I really like this one. “Though she be little, she is fierce.”
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I’m very flattered to have Shakespeare in these comments
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Ample example of small but mighty put to a nefarious task. A fine poem.
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many thanks
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An excellent observation… superb! (I believe that word is derived from the French, don’t quote me on it though lol).
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much appreciated, bj
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