(Originally posted February 2014)
my myth in my hand
throbbing veins sting
from pain of ink surging
with urge for release
upon pages where songs
of the ages are penned
to raise praise of great
demigod deeds but the
seeds of my story bear
no special glory no gold
bearded titan inhabits
my skin so the ink that’s
within me must keep
itself continent steeping
my saga till valor or
virtue discovers me
earning the right to be
written and burn in the
bright admiration of
epitaphs worthy of
chisel and stone
Sometimes its the smallest of turns that makes us worthy of that epitaph; Things so small they go unnoticed by us can turn the tides of nations.
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such a poignant observation – thank you, joseph
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Thanks for sparking it.
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Fantastic, sir. Very well done.
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sincerely appreciated
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Great one for my gravestone – I’ll credit you of course!
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save the engraver’s fee and just go with a recording playing round the clock your recitals of those hilarious stories – you will have the most popular gravesite in the UK
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This is really good. Great job, Paul.
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much appreciated, richard
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You’re welcome
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The ink you write with has the power to elevate and make reverent, any theme you choose it seems. Quite admirable, and often breathtaking.
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oh my – another comment for my keepsake box
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May you wear them on a gold chain.
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This is wonderful. I love poetry with quick-fire rhymes like that. Google ‘climbing rhyme’ as a poetic structure; it’s similar to the style you wrote with there, only more constrained. I found it both challenging and rewarding to attempt to utilise.
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thank you for your thoughtful comment – I refer to this as random rhyme
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Sounds perfectly reasonable! I sometimes write with a very similar style, which I guess makes me a random rhymer too!!
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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most welcome always!
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O my God! You just write so well, my friend!
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you are most kind and I sincerely appreciate it
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excellent
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thanks, baldy
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