24 comments on “Last Words

  1. The ink you write with has the power to elevate and make reverent, any theme you choose it seems. Quite admirable, and often breathtaking.

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  2. This is wonderful. I love poetry with quick-fire rhymes like that. Google ‘climbing rhyme’ as a poetic structure; it’s similar to the style you wrote with there, only more constrained. I found it both challenging and rewarding to attempt to utilise.

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