
“Autumn Abstract” by David Lane
I am autumn
come sit here with me
bring your silence
as summer recedes
give us listen
my speeches of color
each outburst
a soundless explosion
reflecting the thoughts
that I know to be
troubling you
draped with despair
helpless grief
at the dying of summer
and with it its promise
to make you a place
in its ancient admired
beds of beauty
a place of respect
an inclusion
in cultural gardens
conveying a dignity
long in abeyance
withheld by ambivalent
warm sun and sky
too preoccupied
with their familiars
to recognize differences
strengthen their realm
that diversity serves
to enrich their dominion
their vast astronomical
prelacy pointless
unless it will bless both
the silent and vocal
the dreary and vivid
the weak and the strong
I am autumn
come sit here with me
mark my colors
these old and new
foreign and
native phrased hues
brief reminders
that illustrate why
life is better in spectrum
my job is transition
my joy to recite of those
unfulfilled promises
dying does not
lead to death
but a fading to sleep
for a season of rest
a few months of reflection
to contemplate coolly
the culpable civics
mistakenly geared
to aversion of change
I am autumn
come sit here with me
let’s compose a new world
a new portrait of words
to arrive with
fresh ethical flourish
of wider compassion
awakened in spring
A tonal tapestry of autumn that captures the heart.Thank you, Paul.
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much appreciated, professor
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So beautiful! You’ve captured autumn perfectly. 🍃🍂🍁
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thanks kindly, dorinda
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You’re welcome 🙂
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I think this is an excellent metaphor and a perfect fit for Peter’s challenge – https://notehelfer.wordpress.com/2016/09/23/a-voice-for-the-voiceless-a-poetry-challenge/
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appreciate the affirmation
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An absolute ‘belter’ of a poem. I agree wholeheartedly with Rivrvlogr above. I shall re-read and tweet.
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cheers, mike
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Remarkable verse, my friend! Yes, it will do very nicely in a collection of Verses for the Voiceless! Thank you!
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thank you for the inspiration
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Love this it flows effortlessly, Autumn is my favourite time of year. 🌳
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mine, too
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I love your writing. All of it. So beautiful.
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your comment touches me deeply
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Utterly and Beguilingly Gorgeous 🙂
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you are very kind, cynthia
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Wondrous. And the painting is a perfect complement to your remarkable poem.
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thank you most kindly
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This is so good, Paul. The brilliant colors of the canvas set the stage for the emotions you evoke in the poem. Thought-filled write.
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I’m so glad to know you enjoyed it
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Short yet beautiful. Great work, your content is always a joy to read!
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I appreciate that very much
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Wonderfully beautiful.
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sincere thanks
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This makes my heart soar in appreciation of the season…I loved these lines:
dying does not
lead to death
but a fading to sleep
for a season of rest
Beautiful and inspiring read.
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I deeply appreciate your most thoughtful comments
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Very nice and I love the picture:)
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many thanks
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You’re most welcome
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Tender and beautiful words of consolation from Autumn. It is peaceful to move on from Summer. I can feel it.
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your reaction delights me – thank you
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Lovely imagery and insight.
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much appreciated
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I don’t have autumn in this part of town even though I know what it is like because I was there. Thank you for the reminder and bring back my memory of autumn that could have been here.
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thank you for your thoughtful comment
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You’re welcome. Will be back.
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Love both the poem and the artwork. Such a delight to sit and reflect upon them in the midst of a busy day. Thank you.
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you gladden my heart
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“…dying does not
lead to death
but a fading to sleep…”
I spent my first five years in America’s Midwest. I remember all the grownups saying, “The trees die in the winter.”
Why did no one say, “The trees go to sleep in the winter”?
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perhaps they lacked a poet’s sensibilities
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A beautiful and fitting tribute to Autumn. I love it– the Fall and your thoughts.
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thank you most sincerely, ellen
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The ‘spectrum’ of season is truly breathtaking, a transition in nature’s presence and purpose. I surely miss the floral burst of leaves’ readiness to fall in a blanket of beauty and decay, a life cycle metaphoric to humanity’s arrival and succumbing to the maturity of their years and deserved rest. Here in the west our foliage remains evergreen for the most part with a dappled pallor of earth tones for season’s measure.
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beautifully stated
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‘Bring your silence’…and gain hope! Your writing–Beautiful. Full of inspiration. Thank you. 🙂
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I’m glad to know that you enjoyed it
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i enjoyed the poetic journey. the voice is welcoming thoughtful, a reassuring guide for this reader. and i learned a new word; “prelacy,” which is always a treat.
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I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed it – thank you for your kind comments
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I enjoyed the gentle cadences of this. It was an enveloping poem.
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I pleased to know that it worked for you
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“brief reminders/that illustrate why/life is better in spectrum” I just love these lines and hope beyond anything else today that people letting either fear or hatred consume their hearts and mixing all their own hues into a pallid gray, can hear echoes of your words here and begin to heal. Also, when you talk about composing a new world, I am reminded of a time in my whimsical, and yes, lost days, when a thought kept arising from my soul that it is possible to ‘compose a world’ and that God is actually rooting for me to do so, and that we would do it together. I haven’t thought about this inspiring message for quite some time, but your poem stirs my soul.
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your heartening comments are sincerely appreciated
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Reblogged this on Virgogray Press and commented:
Enjoyed this piece. Have a read.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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