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inelegant illness afflicts him
who bumps about corridors
rattling locks
with the bones in his tail
stalking for deer
with a rosin-swept bow
in the malformed aesthetics
of calabash pipe-smoke
tainted with henbane
that curls around houndstooth
staining the Inverness cape
knowing bliss has no keys
he kicks open doors
of two-cornered rooms
no doctor would bless
finding stairs Piranesi
could have designed
their paths up or down
all land the same place
where a grandfather clock
ticks the tempo of fear
and brocade paranoia
drapes barrister boxes
of leather-bound brains
and mementoes of sins
hiding fine-pestled clues
behind acid-etched glass
in plain sight
yet unseen
in differently hued
hallucinogens
that powder
alchemical bellies
of porcelain mortars
where hundreds of
gripping good crimes
would be solved
(originally posted March 2013)
oh my god, this is my favorite poem I’ve read from you. Every single line, every single word. The grandfather clock ticking fear, especially, but the leather bound brains and memories of crimes…wow. Bravo!
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Well then, by way of return, this is my favorite comment received.
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As it should be ; )
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I’m of huge fan of Mr Holmes, and this is a wonderful homage 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it. The Holmes stories were the first book collection I built as a boy. Thank you for commenting.
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You’re welcome! Did you ever read the Father Brown Mysteries? Similar, but with a healthy dose of whimsy.
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I did enjoy the Father Brown series, and all of Agatha Christie, but that was many years ago. I’m also a big fan of John Buchan and Patrick O’Brian.
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Agatha Christie is wonderful, and, of course, I know the 39 Steps, but I’ll take a look at Patrick O’Brian 🙂 Thank you!
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There is enough intrigue and mystery in this to set ol’ Sherlock himself into a thoughtful pose and whimper of acceptance. Great quality Paul I enjoyed the references, image and obvoius depth CD knowledge put to exceptional use. Thanks in turn for your kind comment posted.
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thanks for the generous comments
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Absolutely Marvelous!!! Sherlock would certainly approve 😉
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what a delightful comment – thank you
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Ooooh, so many good phrases here–I love, “Bliss has no keys” and “gripping good crimes”; and “brocade paranoia” is just plain Fabulous; “clock ticks the tempo of fear” is SO accurate! Wowza
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glad you liked it – tried to capture his other-wordliness
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Inquisitive mind.
Strong intuition.
Olden days that i wish i was born into…
This poem evoked beautiful longings i used to have about the fact that i wish i was born in different era. Such beauty.
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thank you kindly, owl – I’ve always had similar longings
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*sigh*
If only things were different.
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Wonderful … and very far from elementary.
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ha ha – thank you, Watson
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You’re welcome, Holmes.
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A very special piece and thanks for posting it – much appreciated. Were I ever asked to identify and address a miscreants mannerisms by the police I truly believe that if presented my evidence in the style of your poem then there would be no requirement for any photo-fit! Only problem, of course, is that while I might know the words I never piece them together with such sublime craft and class!
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if they had asked me, I fear the constabulary would have locked me in their rubber room
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Fresh take on the old boy. I enjoy all the textures evoking the heavy dressage of the period. Would love to see him deer stalking about more locations in perhaps a companion poem, this could be fleshed out (the movement of the described character thru the piece carries the reader, and it is a lovely ride).
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interesting thought – I will mull it over
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Beautiful piece. I enjoyed the read
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appreciate that
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Reminds me of the film Mr. Holmes starring Ian McKellen where he plays an aging Sherlock.
Always excellent poetry, however poignant, Paul.
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thanks, Michael – I, too, enjoyed that flick
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I love the silhouette and your rich descriptions that conjure up Sherlock Holmes.
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a character who fascinated me ever since boyhood
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