“Sagittarius” By JP Rhea
reaching his powerful archer’s arm
he slapped the man in the moon
for daring to watch over night
yet do nothing to save
those who suffer
the darkness
alone
(originally posted June 2013)
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Love the message of the poem and the form is neat. Never thought of Saggitarius that way, not knowing that much about him though it is my sign.
Sending you a link that made me think of you– hope you enjoy it.
http://www.finerminds.com/personal-growth/philosophersnotes-day-27/
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thanks for the interesting link – I’ll explore it
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Very powerfull and inspirational, aswell as creative, I really like how you depicted the sign.
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thank you kindly
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brilliant
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thank you sincerely
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I love this one! Happens to be my birth sign!
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glad to know it worked for you
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About time…someone needed to!
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ha ha – he’s been too smug
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Superb.
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thank you, sir
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Oh, now I love this!! Slap ‘im again, Sagi!
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ha ha – guess he could have shot him with an arrow but I didn’t want to kill the moon
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Yep, wouldn’t be prudent.
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Very nice
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thanks, Barb
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Wow, beautiful!
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thanks kindly
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I do not like Sagittarius. All the people that have come into my life with that sign have been cruel.
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sorry to hear that
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Ouch 😀 Is the man in the moon supposed to take away the darkness ? Or is it the sun who comes up bringing on the light ? Thank you for you unique thoughts 🙂
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much appreciated
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