in the dark
of the night
place and time
for ablutions
of tears
a purge of the
pain from the
crippling strain
upon days
sorely hobbled
by holding
false postures
of cheer
in the dark
of the night
place and time
for a wash
of emotions
before that
despondent
deep blue
the discolor
of woe
can set
permanent stain
on the heart
in the dark
of the night
place and time
for this private
indulgence
no room
inside sadness
for love or
its sympathy
no room
for genuine joy
to find sleep
in the mind
That this is exquisitely written probably helps not.
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it does – thank you
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Time is a healer though. 🙂
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it can be, perhaps
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Sad, but beautiful.
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much appreciated
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Beautifully expressed.
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thanks kindly
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Through the glass haze of medications I recognize the familiar pathway of darkness . . . Would that God would say once more, ‘Let there be light!’
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I might welcome a re-Creation
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Reblogged this on CRAIN'S COMMENTS and commented:
A lot of good material today, next to none of it overtly involving football or trump. I really like this poem in its darkness.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers – and for your most thoughtful comment
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I loved this. Especially since I speak of it all the time. There is “Hello darkness my old friend. Come to speak with you again” from “The sound of Silence” by Simon and Garfunkel, and Billy Joel’s “In the Middle of the night”. I wrote a whole blog on this topic. I wish I had been able to reblog this poem onto that blog. I liked the cadence very much. I wish, Paul, that you would get someone to read some of these poems. Someone like Tom O’Bedlam in roll the Dice. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=36CYMdFmDeQ . then, find the way to put a button on your page so we can hear the poem. the images are always fantastic.
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wow – that was quite a reading of Bukowski – food for thought
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Wonderful.
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many thanks
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Gut-wrenching.
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it felt that way in the writing
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I could tell. I’m so sorry.
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powerful. m.e.
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I appreciate that
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I feel desperation and pain truthfully told. I’m sorry.
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we all work through our sadnesses in our own ways
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Hi Paul In the dark of the night many cower in terror! Thank you for liking “Android!” Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.
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appreciate the comment, malc
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Beautiful and so true!
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I sincerely appreciate that
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Reblogged this on Gratitude & Random Thoughts and commented:
So very accurate!
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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A powerful writing on such a traumatic condition suffered by so very many Paul. Your selection of such an aptly striking and representative visual makes this presentation all the more engaging. I suffer the ills of anxiety and while my wife has suggested it as more on the symptomatic side of depression my medical assessment has suggested otherwise.
While I suffer in my own right with some frequency it is manageable and I empathize with anyone who is engulfed in the darkness and depth of such despair. Those who do not suffer likewise cannot fully comprehend the gravity of this condition nor the perilous line between ‘sanity’ and ‘insanity’, ‘control’ vs ‘complete loss of control’. I have witnessed the complete and utter degradation of one’s soul and when that thin line is crossed the meltdown which ensues is frightening to say the least.
I feel strongly that to broach this subject has the potential of healing and perhaps even more importantly…to foster a greater understanding by those who write people off in their dire time of need and comforting.
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I’m sorry for your experience, don. I’ve come to learn it is a more common affliction than might be apparent – in my case, born of chronic physical pain. Pharmacology enables a coping.
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Every time I see your kind mark of approval on one of my posts, I wonder what kind of day you are having. Now I know to wonder what kind of night you had. It’s not called The Hour of The Wolf for nothing, and, with chronic pain, that’s 25 hours a day. You write of the powerlessness we all fear and must face — ironically, there is power in that. If only it were narcotic.
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thank you for your thoughtful and most kind comments – some days I read – some days I write – and some days I do both – the nights, however, are usually dysfunctional
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Nights can be cruel.
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Oh, I just love it! And the painting too, it’s so relevant to the poem.
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much appreciated
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your words are nicely collected…
dark cruel nights, sadness, loneliness, and love; a perfect combination for a rooted inspirations.
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appreciate your thoughtful comment
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such rich, and intense writings deserves all the appreciation..i will select one of your books to read,,,hope one day you might grant me your opinion on a post as i have just started to blog some random thoughts…thank you.
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in attempting to access your site, I am informed it has been deleted by its author
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