oceans call me
cast their voices
on limitless
stretches of sand
and washed stone
breakers heave
tides of sighs
implore my return
to beginnings
to places so old
and so deep
no remembrance
survives from the
effortless traumas
of watery birth
slow surprising
recursive events
of creation
directly conceived
simple sparks
of complexity
fixing the form
that gave life
to the mind
of the world
oceans call me
as if to say
now would be right
to step into the sea
swim and dive
down and down
to those origins
underneath time
to return
would mean
I might remember
and in the
remembering
I could forget
whom I am
free to think
once and only again
of just whom
I would
rather become
A sublime poem of power and reflection.
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cheers, mike – and welcome back from your birthday festivities
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Truly aqua`marine . . .
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*smile*
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Great poem. Love these lines – “simple sparks
of complexity”
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much appreciated, debbie
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Oh WOWZA…I too “feel” the calls of the ocean…as usual you’ve penned thought beyond exquisite, stellar…
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thank you so very much
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You’re most welcome.
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The ocean calls me too – beautifully penned.
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so glad you enjoyed it
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I too have a similar feeling but oceans are replaced by mountains. 🙂
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we are all, I think, specially affected by some aspect of nature
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We all are a part of nature.
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yes, indeed
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“Oceans called to me …” loved this poem ^^
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I appreciate that most sincerely
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Reblogged this on The Phoenix Rises.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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No problem! Well written.
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Innocenec birthed into trauma until eventual release from. Life indicted. Sadly true, upon reflection.
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and yet, every day holds some promise of renewal
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This is great
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many thanks
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I find such blessed balance when I walk along the sandy shores of the sea. Your words take me back to my recent days down by the water, gazing into the depths. Most engaging your words are Paul.
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I’m glad that it worked for you, don
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Beautiful imagery and depth.
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thank you most kindly
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Hi
Nice post! I’ve made a posts about ocean and some other topics so if you have time and will please go and check it out! If you like it pls follow me, I follow you.
Thank you! 😀
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many thanks – I’ll give it a look
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Thank you very much! 😀
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fyi – I find no “follow this blog” button on your site
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