
“Architectural Abstract” by Debra Hurd
build it up
tear it down
build again
swing the
hammer
the maul
light and dark
in recursive
exchange
timing
soundless
bright beats
of circadian
rhythms
each day a
new construct
a castle
of courage
each night
reveals
structural
failures in
cracks of
innate
indefeasible
fears who
demand
demolition
the blueprint
for bravery
raising a
tower erect
of conviction
continues
to hide
holding secrets
from citizens
here on this
pitiless street
in this
merciless
city of time
Exceptional words.
And a very good image match.
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many thanks
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Bravo! This is an incredible piece of verse!
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I sincerely appreciate that
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Wonderful metaphor and imagery!
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thank you ever so kindly
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The allegory of the metaphor and so much more, to boot! A masterclass.
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thank you, my friend
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You echo my thoughts, feelings–love “castle of courage”…I’m thinking courage is the strongest building material, and without it, no tent will stand.
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amen
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🙂
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The rebuilding practically everyday is exhausting, I find.
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I’m often not up to it
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Me neither…
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A marvelous construction in its own right Paul. The visual here offers such marvelous connection to the words.
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glad you enjoyed it
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This is a fascinating read, good work!
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many thanks
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