stepping smooth across rocks and rye
drinking the wood grain from planks
soaked with jazz hunched and swaying
on stilts in the muddy red clay of Jim Crow
wringing blues from a shantytown sax
pearled with sharecropper calluses
moist with the heat of a Saturday night
every teardrop shaped note that escaped
the tin roof made magnolia tree blossoms
hang heavy with redolent sweating sweet
shame of their pink and white bystander guilt
(originally posted December 2013)
Yes, yes, yes
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glad it worked for you
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awesome painting
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it was the first one I found when searching for images
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really nice !
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What an interesting way with words! Paul, this one is really beautiful. Especially the last lines!
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that means quite a lot to me
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Your poetry is very refreshing.
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Old Jim Crow’s ghost still lives in the South despite the ‘repeal’. Great description in this one.
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thank you kindly, Johnny
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reminds me of my favorite author Zora Neale Hurston and her folklore regarding the town in Florida she was from (Eatonville, I think)…great imagery!!!
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what a wonderful comment – thank you
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You truly write us a painting, Paul–no need for complimentary image. Fabuloso
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it’s how I compensate, I suppose, for an inability to paint on canvas
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I know the feeling–paint by numbers is my speed, though I don’t have the patience for them anymore; poems go quicker.
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Damn! This poem is “mouth watering” soaked with jazz.. 🙂 Beautiful…
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I thank you most kindly
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Magnificent.
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conjures up a time and place when joy was hell bent on defeating the pain
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Marvelous!
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glad you liked it
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Amazing piece Paul 🙂 bravo!!!!
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much appreciated
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Where do you get these beautiful paintings?
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I have a bit of fun searching the net for complementary images
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Well, let me know of any particular sites you visit 🙂 Thanks!
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Excellent, especially the magnolia metaphor.
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much appreciated
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I grew up in Mississippi during Jim Crow. Your images bring back memories – pearled share cropper calluses, wood-grain alcohol (moonshine) and magnolia blossoms. I cringe.
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we all own some historic share of an institutional guilt
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