
“Old North Cemetery” by Mary Sarg Murphy
I never felt wind
in a graveyard
flowers stand where they died
unscattered and dried
by the merciless
beating rays of the sun
perhaps stillness
is something ordained
by the stones
somber sentries
permitting no airstream
to move through these
wrought-iron precincts
except for the breathy
expulsion of sighs
that accompany whispers
from underneath
mounded green sod
asking “Why?”
then and now
once and over again
but no answer
has ever stirred
motionless mourning
no reason been heard
by the dutiful stones
or the listening bones
lying under their watch
(originally posted November 2013)
Powerful and poignant.
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thank you kindly
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Oh wow. Oh wow, oh wow. Sorry, Paul–I have nothing intelligible–it’s way beyond “good”.
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wow is very intelligible – and so appreciated
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The pure beauty of poetry, words that left me speechless, but rejoiced my poetic soul.
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your lovely comments go straight to my keepsake box, Lily
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A wonderful elegy Paul. I particularly admire the lines “perhaps stillness is something ordained by the stones” – that took me straight there.
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much appreciated, Nigel
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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This one simply flows! Lovely!
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much appreciated
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Not only a masterpiece yet true also – this poem took me back to the ‘quiet garden’ at Chilham Castle nr Canterbury for all is still there.
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believe I had read about Chilham not too long ago – recently restored by new owners
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Still on the back of those stones many a poetic line whispers on . . . I have seen and felt them myself up at St Andrew’s . . .
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I’ve always felt a spiritual communion in these places
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Remarkable, Paul. Just love it!!
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thank you dearly, my friend
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This writing was powerful and delivered in such a way that it created image after image, and enhanced the emotions surround the writing that much more.
This was a very well-written piece of work. Very much enjoyed, excellent write.
Sean
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I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful and generous comments, Sean
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Thank YOU for allowing me to share your work!
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wow, super good one!!! gonna reblog it! 🙂
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thanks dearly, DuBois
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my pleasure!! means I don’t have to do one today! hahaha
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Reblogged this on Shards Of DuBois and commented:
super good one by poesypluspolemics.com!!
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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no worries! love a good poem! 🙂
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Blown away! nuff said.
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that positively thrills me
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Reblogged this on Heartafire and commented:
blown away! See the original please.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Goosebumps.
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can’t think of any better comment – thank you Amy Rose
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SMILE
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Oh this is amazing!! Not only do I love the picture, but the feelings and visuals your words evoke are just spectacular1 I love taking photos of graveyards, but I’ve never tried writing about them… doubt I could even come close to this one. I just ❤ it! 😀
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your lovely comments make this old man’s heart smile – thank you most kindly, keli
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“I never felt wind in a graveyard”…”or the listening bones lying under their watch” IT’S BEEN A LONG TIME SINSE I READ SOMETHING SO GOOD! ((((((CHILLS))))))) THANK YOU!
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your comment thrills me – you made my night
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fabulous.
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thanks kindly, sedge
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This so perfectly depicts that sense of stillness in a graveyard. Like time has stood still for some. Whenever I see the faded flowers in their vases I’m saddened by how forlorn they appear. Then a well-tended grave overflows with freshness and you know life has visited this place. This is beautifully said, Paul.
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as a long time tourist of old grave yards, I never cease to be moved by them
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Utterly and compleatly fabulous.
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thank you most kindly, n
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Reblogged this on Kindra M. Austin and commented:
I’m in love with this poem. ❤
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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You’re so welcome. I love it so much!
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Breathtaking!
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many thanks, ellen
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I love the flow of the lines, barely disturbing the atmosphere of the graveyard. Somehow they speak of peace to me. Really beautiful, Paul.
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thank you for the most lovely compliment
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All I can say is Bravo!
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tipping my hat to you in gratitude
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Exquisitely Beautifully.
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very kind of you to say
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Sincerely welcome.
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I felt as if I am standing right there and felt peace inside of my heart! Most beautifully written!
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I appreciate your lovely comment
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The lines are broken in an haphazard manner making meaning unreachable.
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sorry it didn’t work for you – but each line break was deliberately placed
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