stop the shadows
please stop them
already too lengthened
stretching my stick figure
legs tall as ambulant trees
head drawn darkly
in sharp angled
chimney-stack silhouette
hideous with an
elongated scream
reaching closer toward
end of day
wanting to touch
that dead moment
of sundown oblivion
(originally posted November 2013)
Love this 🙂
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I’m pleased to know you do
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Great and piercing imagery.
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much appreciated
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The sadness of the day getting to an end…
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such are the thoughts of aging ungracefully
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You are not one of them.
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that’s kind of you to say
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Wow, I just love this! Captures the fears. Love “sundown oblivion”– though night comes with its own set of fears.
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I feel my “day” is aging too rapidly
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That must be very hard. I am sorry.
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it is what it is – the natural process I suppose
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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Surreal panic – I guess only you could pull this one off with such panache.
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I wonder if panic and panache have the same root
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Those hours when it feels like the light is dying…
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every night a new death, every morn a rebirth
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Very good. Love your work.
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always appreciate your kind comments
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distorted illusions
the stuff of nightmares
cell glued to head?
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madness cum technology?
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indeed
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Reblogged this on OUR POETRY CORNER.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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A wonderful poem!
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thank you kindly, Ina
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Poignant and powerful, Paul.
Makes me think of a line from a song
“…So you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it’s sinking
Racing around to come up behind you again.
The sun is the same in a relative way but you’re older,
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death.”
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what a marvelous lyric
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oh i should have said… it is from “Time” by Pink Floyd
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So fantastic. Off to read it again!
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sincere thanks, diana
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