14 comments on “Breakdown

  1. Aa picture has a thousand words, we can only imagine the things eyes see ,things that are not all there as the eyes reflecting the mind of the soul. The art work of simplicity but, also has a paradoxical affect on the reader leads to hearing much more to the chosen words that meets the eye when taken into complete context after reading the poem twice. Sometimes it is the shorter poems that hit hard that cause the most insight. This requires us to step outside ourselves and get into the poet’s mind. Well versed, colorful writing, the pictures suits it best. Work well done Poet

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