28 comments on “Antediluvian

  1. Love the use of rain as the cleansing agent, pure, natural, falls from the heavens/sky and is vital for life and the wake up ‘smack’ at the end when we think that rain’s all we need, suddenly we find if we’ve got a ‘slate’ to cleanse it’s not going to be easy. A modern day parable for all. Clever and of great import. Thank you Paul.

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  2. excellent poem, we believe we understand and that we have done that which requires us to cleanse and be better people and then heavy rains come and bring destruction and we get sad but should we be so sad? I ask myself and your poem said it best it touches the soul

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