we first met
in dark seams
between torn
sleepless dreams
long ago in the
terrible time
of a traumatized
tormented mind
he extended a
steadying hand
helped me down
from the precipice
flouting the
judgmental glare
of a jury of stars
he spoke quietly
laying assurances
into my heart as he
led me back home
to my life
to my courage
this man who now
sixty years on
shoulders caped
in soft moonlight
fills fully the frame
of my handsome
hewn doorway
extending a
steadying hand
and I know from
the glint of
the pride in his eye
time has come
we return
to that place
where he found me
Well, chosen art as well.
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thank you for linking my poem with your readers
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This is amazing and so heart warming.
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I can picture it, “handsome hewn doorway” and all.
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many thanks for reading and commenting
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Time rise; time fall. I over use the word, I know, yet magnificent is the word.
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much appreciated, my friend
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Oh Paul…I’ve got tears running down my face… This is so heartfelt and exquisite, I must reblog on Sunday. Much sister-love to you…
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oh dear – now I’m tearing up, too – thanks from the heart – but your readers will be getting tired of my old voice
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Well we can have a good cry together–you can sip some vino and I’ll pop a diet Coke… Are you saying you don’t want me to reblog?? I really really want to–because it’s so real, and so what our Savior Lord is all about, but I’ll honor your wishes. Let me know.
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ok to reblog –
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Thank you!
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Makes me think of Martin Buber’s ‘I/Thou’ picture of our relationship with others and with God . . . A moving portrait you paint: gentle yet so strong . . . Bravo!
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very perceptive, my friend – it’s perhaps a bit more ich/es than ich/du
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Mesmerizing intersection of dreams and reality.
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much appreciated
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Stunning writing. Really moving.
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your thoughtful comment touches me
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Reblogged this on GOD'S CHAIR.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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You’re most welcome–if my printer worked, I’d print it for posting on my fridge where I’d see it many times per day 🙂
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a beautiful post Paul ❤
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thank you most sincerely
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candescent, Paolo, pure candescence…makes me glow, . Thanks G
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gorgeous word, candescent – thank you, my friend
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Good Day 🙂
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I was just thinking about the subtle way the poets were clever in the olden days at describing certain mating habits and love in ways the reader must interpret the poem and get a deeper meaning that when things are lain out in full force it is the beauty of the metaphor it contacts the mind body and spirit seeing things from various perceptions. As poets it takes the art to a higher realm for interpretive insight helps to master the thinking process. Excellent work Paul Lenzi
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metaphor is indeed the foundation of this art form
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