
“The Approaching Moonlit Rainstorm” by George Hunter Tyneside
haggard mountains
hang listless
under light of a
narcotic moon
birds high in their
settles asleep
in the syrupy
sedative air
one sober gray owl
scolding the sky
for its fitful explosions
black bats on the wing
wraiths immune to the
night’s metaphysics
while down below
reach of the memory
inside the wood
and the glass
beneath torture
of frangible linens
the human pain
swallowed by
capsules of colors
a few quiet hours
metabolized moments
insensible to the
red rage of an
imminent dawn
This is superb, Paul. The imagery is lovely and the figurative language is just breathtaking.
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I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful comments.
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You’re most welcome. It was an awesome read.
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Indeed, I agree with NMY above, ‘the figurative language in just breathtaking’. I cannot put it any better, Paul
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many thanks, my friend
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Lovely Paul. I especially love the last few lines. “metabolized moments insensible to the red rage of an imminent dawn”. 🙂
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many thanks, penny
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Fantastic! One of your best, Paul. “Narcotic moon” is brilliant! Best, Ellen
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appreciate the generous compliments, ellen
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Creatively written lines, as always, Paul. Empathizing with you…
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thanks dearly, betty
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Vivid and powerful!
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many thanks
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Oh dear, my sympathies, Paul…amazing how your talent is not eclipsed by such agony as well as the needed narcotics; in fact, the lines/imagery are sharpened so that I could almost feel the acuteness of the pain. I’m so sorry, and stepping up my fervent prayers on your behalf. I can co-misery-ate to some degree: I continue to be ill, can’t sleep for coughing, and today I fell in the library–though thank God, I was able to walk out unaided, after 2 kind ladies helped me up. Humiliation kept my, “oh, how silly of me”, persona intact. We’re also having high heat warnings this week, such a joy…NOT. 🙂 Take care, friend.
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oh my – be assured prayers are being returned in kind – my wife and I have had a number of falls, which is why we need to move from this house
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Thank you so much for prayers, Paul. I was grateful that, being short, I didn’t have far to fall 🙂
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The words and fantastic images could be likened to a fever dream. Only it is all too real to you. I am sorry for your pain, Paul.
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sincere thanks for your thoughtfulness
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When sleep eludes us we become the Keepers of the Night . . . Evocative words, my Friend, Evocative words!
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thanks, peter
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