I’ve used the phrase often
not with small purpose
when nature resplendent
unfolds into view
breathtaking with grace
where bluebonnet skies
clutching billowed chiffons
meet with lavender rolls
that upholster the earth
between sepia seams
edging emerald forests
and purple-gray foothills
ascending cool slopes
capped by eggshells and pearls
where air has clean taste
scrubbed by fingers of breeze
and waters clear smell
sparkling salted or pure
to imbibe and intoxicate
quickening species
robust and refreshed
through connection by brisk
elemental comingling
of molecules built from
stray bits of far stars
coalesced by the livening
rays of the sun
(originally posted April 2013)
That, Paul, is one reeling, intoxicating landscape of words. I am a little tipsy on all the beauty here, not to mention the sale and scope.
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Tipsy is good – but this one needs a rewrite – maybe another day
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And wonder wears out the imagination
And the sage is at a loss….
Such is the trickery of the awe of God’s country.
Hello Paul. Been a while. Word is you got another award nom. Let’s find that out now. Congrats meanwhile.
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Thanks, Doc
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Fascinating palette of vocab for imagery–you’re definitely a poet to learn from, and have made it to my Top 2 list (for whatever that’s worth). Dad always called the Pac NW “God’s Country”…
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I wonder if you’d permit me to print it out, for my personal keepsake file?
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I’m honored to be in the top 2. Feel free to print away, as long as my name stays on it.
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Absolutely, your name remains–and it’s just for me, anyhow.
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Hi Paul,
I think this is a fun poem, starting out kind of outside the frame of itself, but then entering into some pretty fine imagery.
Thanks you for your read and like on The Danforth Anchor.
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I’m glad you enjoyed the imagery.
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Thank you of course, not thanks you. :~!)
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Reblogged this on Poesy plus Polemics.
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These lines are dizzying in their beauty, as are the elements that make up “God’s country.” My favorite, however, is “capped by eggshells and pearls.” Beautiful word images, and the visual image is perfect to go along with your poetic descriptions.
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your comment goes into my keepsake box – thanks, Maggie
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Reblogged this on BARB STREETING.
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thanks for sharing this with others
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Stunning imagery!
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I’m glad you liked it
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I must be in a weepy mood–this got to me again, such fabulous word-painting, Sir.
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old age has made me an easy weeper
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The experts say it’s about changing hormone levels…
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nice rush, mister 🙂 well done
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much appreciated
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