it must have passed him by
that moment of greatness
a lifetime of waiting
for something astonishing
something that never would happen
how sad is that lifetime unlived
so much waste in the waiting
the pitiful longing
for some nonexistent arcane
remote source of self-worth
all the time unacquainted
with manifest wherewithal
held in his own two good hands
all the genuine greatness
no more than a matter of mind
an authentic assertion of will
whose reward guarantees
a deep quiet contentment
As I get older I think about “a life time unlived” and “wasted in the waiting”. So many of us are guilty of this. I am much more aware each day. Thought provoking piece Paul, beautifully captured.
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thanks so much for your thoughtful comment, penny
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Perhaps…no, by far the best collection of words I have read this day.
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thank you, my friend
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I feel like you wrote this for me. Point taken. I love it, too.
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appreciate your thoughtful comment
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Oh, this is Marvelous–sometimes I have moments of wondering about that. Great poem.
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I suppose we’re all a mix of the two – the dreamer and the doer
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Perhaps.
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Love this and I believe as we get older we become more aware and it seems to be a different awareness, as well. Well stated thoughts, Paul.
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I appreciate that very much
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Thanks for your wise words. As I grow older I like the self I became better than the shadow of one who might have been. I was so happy to pass retirement age and let go of thinking I had something to prove. The picture is stunning.
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that need to prove nearly killed me
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I’m happy that it did not. I would miss your poetry.
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“We live by mercy if we live. / To that we have no fit reply / But working well and giving thanks, /
Loving God, loving one another, / To keep Creation’s neighborhood.” ~ Wendell Berry
This day you are both my inspirations . . .
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it’s probably taken too long for me to appreciate berry’s simple prescription – your associating my poem with his is beyond generous
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