
“Choices We Make” by Lynne Taetzsch
term of art
social contract
default preservation
of natural rights
an enshrinement
of two-party choices
enabling a freemarket
freehand employment
it underscores truth
about systems of
capitalist economics
that freedom is risky
acknowledging
he who has earned
the most choices
possesses real power
Okay, so I get to risk being the first to respond to your poem. (gulping!) You manage to walk the not-so-tight rope between art and political commentary without needing a net. So many who attempt this so clearly could use a net… and perhaps a jacket as well. I debated if you withhold enough for this to be excellent. On third reading, it’s probably as close as you’d want it to go and still make you point.
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many thanks for your thought provoking comments
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You are welcome, sir!
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Words are powerful. So is what is not said. Shadowlands of something hard to understand but we live with every day
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appreciate your observations
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Well I reckon you’ve said it all Paul. Less is more when a stark fact is made clear. Moreover, the old socialist that is me can find not a thing to disagree with here. Facts after all are facts, save that yours are eloquently noted in the artform that is your own pleasingly unique brand of poetry
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you touch my heart, my friend
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