7 comments on “At Will

  1. Okay, so I get to risk being the first to respond to your poem. (gulping!) You manage to walk the not-so-tight rope between art and political commentary without needing a net. So many who attempt this so clearly could use a net… and perhaps a jacket as well. I debated if you withhold enough for this to be excellent. On third reading, it’s probably as close as you’d want it to go and still make you point.

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  2. Well I reckon you’ve said it all Paul. Less is more when a stark fact is made clear. Moreover, the old socialist that is me can find not a thing to disagree with here. Facts after all are facts, save that yours are eloquently noted in the artform that is your own pleasingly unique brand of poetry

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