(This expressionist painting has always fascinated me and gave rise to my following poem.)
what more can be said
when apologies cannot suffice
when all charity drains
from mean wounds to the heart
the aggrieved turn away
leaving evident guilt
unrelieved unforgiven
alone with the sin of itself
a contemptible factor of loss
now condemned to sustain
psychic pain of abandonment
punishment served
without pretense of piety
grace all too frail of a virtue
untenable so it would seem
for the most of humanity
I agree.
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cheers
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Nice
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thanks kindly
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Yes, what more can be said, when words are not enough?
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indeed
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I’ve always been a big fan of poems without punctuation or capitals. It kind of leaves the whole flow up to interpretation.
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yes it does – thanks for the comment
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Our violations of each other stain life’s canvas, victims and perpetrators alike, and along with them society and culture besides . . . Loved both the art and the verse!
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well said
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In grace awakening, or reawakened, redemption.
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indeed
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