
Portrait by Tim Mueller
pale blue lines
outline blotches
the shapes and
the shadows of
life by the numbers
faint color codes
cover the mass
produced canvas
designed to create
one more mass
produced portrait
with pigments that
daub and dress
mutual features
of character
common to crowds
save for moments
infrequently fresh
here and there
now and then
when a self-minded
painter flips over
the art board and
makes of its sheer
daunting blankness
a brave handed
bold colored vision
a one-of-a-kind
most remarkable life
From my book Ephemera
I love the way this reads. Reading it out loud made me read it three times 😅
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many thanks
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I think I agree with the above. The poem in one of those that demands reading out loud.
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most of my edits are made from recitation
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Very nice poem!!
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much appreciated
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no problem
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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Paul, this was really a great piece! Wonderfully done!
Chuck
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I appreciate that most sincerely, chuck
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come examine a “PAINT BY NUMBER” life vs. a one of a kind.
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thank you for sharing my poem with your readers
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The pleasure was mine!
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