10 comments on “Lonesome

  1. The back`pack containing mine has been gathering dust in the garage for the past 10 years. I don’t think my kids will claim it when I’m gone . . .

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  2. MANY years ago, decades ago, I wrote something that included the line, or ended the verse, I don’t recall … with “the need for speed caused a plethora of greed.” Not exactly sure why this reminded me of that, but it did.

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  3. I especially liked the imagery of the second stanza – “leather lipped mouth breathing maw given over to sighs,” etc. Nice work.
    Thank you, by the way, for the like.

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