
“Icy Lake” by Janet James
cold hard edges of winter
recede from a slow nearing sun
ice diminishes
clarity ousts opaque finishes
surfaces find their reveal
living waters
at long last exhale
lakes and millponds
released from their
three moons of torpor
no longer incumbent
on holding their seasonal breath
come again now to quicken
in rippling submission
to mountain-sent winds
casting choppy reflections
in caricature of the sentient
clouds set to oversee
osprey and heron
return to their bars
frigid shadowy shallows
emergent with coldblooded
fish coming out of
their wintery lethargy
stirred by the hooting
and hollering voices ashore
lucky folks who a year ago
chose today’s date
in the age-old tradition of
ice-out day calendar lottery
A masterful depiction of the annual New England rite of spring . . . Bravo!
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your kind words mean a lot – thank you, peter – meanwhile, ice storm coming in tonight – we’ll be watching the trees anxiously
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What wonderful opening lines –
cold hard edges of winter
recede from a slow nearing sun . . .
Wonderful
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many thanks
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May 25th. on the Big Lake 🙂 $$$
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good luck
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Spring has sprung. The winter I became ‘old’ is over. Superb words. I’ve missed them.
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hope the seasons ahead treat you more gently, my friend
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very beautiful poem as usual personifying the ending of severe winter season into somewhat milder spring. The shades of spring arrival is described in subtle manner.
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many thanks
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welcome sir
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Wonderful poem about a new and fresh tradition I’ve not heard of . I wonder if your harsher winters bring out zestier spirits than we who dutifully slog through winter experience. 😦
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I have found no doubt that the typical New Hampshire personality is zesty
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Recently discovering your poetry. Quite gratifying, with beautiful lines to ponder!
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thanks kindly – welcome to my world
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… and an inviting world it is dear man! Thank you Paul!
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